This is part of my Tongan language week homework. I was learning the facts and some stories on how places got there names and learnt some more facts about my culture. One thing I enjoyed reading the facts.
Hi Nesi Good work I like how you explained lots of details about Tongan art.The only problem is that you should add a picture to show what it looks like.
Hello Nesi First off, I think the background and colour scheme you chose is really good. But you have mistakes in your writing, such as using 'there' instead of 'their', and I'm sure there are two C in 'occasion'. Some grammar are also inaccurate, so maybe you can re-read it and fix what you can. Also, I agree with Ana that you should add some photos of Tonga. Mengchun
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Hi Nesi
Good work I like how you explained lots of details about Tongan art.The only problem is that you should add a picture to show what it looks like.
Hello Nesi
First off, I think the background and colour scheme you chose is really good. But you have mistakes in your writing, such as using 'there' instead of 'their', and I'm sure there are two C in 'occasion'. Some grammar are also inaccurate, so maybe you can re-read it and fix what you can. Also, I agree with Ana that you should add some photos of Tonga.
Mengchun
Okay, I will try to fix my post.
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