Making fish for dinner

Making fish for dinner

One sunny morning Jake and his father could hear the birds tweeting. They were hoping it would be a nice day tomorrow too. Jake looked in the cupboards and nothing was there  to eat. They thought maybe we should have fish for the whole day. Jake was too excited he accidently forgot to pack his fishing gear. He hopped in the car and they were ready to go. When they arrived at the Tamaki river Jake moaned and growled. Jake wasn’t expecting it here but that was the only close one. The    other river took miles and miles.

Jake's father chucked his fish rod in the water and all of a sudden he was screaming aaaaaah. He took his fishing rod out and told Jake to get the big bucket to put the fishes in it. Jake’s face was in shock like an exploding tomato. Jake just released that he left everything at home. Jake asked his father if he could use his fishing rod. Off he went and put his fishing rod in the water, then it was starting to get really heavy. It took a while to get it out without getting any help. Jake’s father was just sitting down reading the newspaper.

After a while he was still waiting there without any help. Jake got really excited because he was wondering if he was going to break the world record on getting the humongous fish. His father got up and thought it was just going to be 1 heavy gumboot with stinky rocks in them. Once Jake took it out it turned out true. His father said “ why don’t we have a competition” Jake said “ Yes why not “ in a dead voice.

Let’s start it straight away! YAY!!!!! screamed Jake.

First his father went back home and got the tin and came straight back. It was Jake’s turn first. Aaaaaaah what's that he screamed out loud. It came out and it was a big, gigantic fish with large scales on it. He quickly put the grey fish in the pot. When his father was going to have his turn, he didn’t have time because it was nearly dinner time.  Jake’s father had to go back and get a bigger tin because the other one couldn’t fit in it. When they came back the grey fish was gone. They were in real shock. They came back they only had little bit of time left to do some more fishing. The father caught a bigger fish than the other fish. It looked the same but just bigger.

They went back home and washed the fish and served it to there family. Jake went home very happy at least they still had a fish. Jake and his father caught a very big fish so they called all their family and friends. They came to eat that very big fish. They were really tired like a dead fish. After fishing for a long time they lived happily ever after.

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