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Monday, 10 March 2014

Monday Quick Write

 A wonderful Place

My wonderful place is when I went to rainbowzend. It was my favourite place because I had a picnic with my family and went on all the rides. I mostly liked going on the night rides. When it was still daytime I like going on the bumper cars because you get to bump everyone. 
It was beautiful because I had to have a picnic with my family.
I hope I go there again but when its time for the night rides.

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1 comments:

Anonymous said...

That sounds like a fun time Nesi. I like the bumper boats at Rainbows End but I always get wet.

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