The title of my book is Eight Keys.The author of this book is Suzanne Lafleur. This is a fiction book. My ending is better because I described some of my sentences, and added noises.
I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Ms Kirkpatrick.
Friday, 3 April 2015
Holiday Reading - Rewrite the ending
The title of my book is Eight Keys.The author of this book is Suzanne Lafleur. This is a fiction book. My ending is better because I described some of my sentences, and added noises.
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2 comments:
Hi Nesi,
This is the wonderful retelling, I really like it. I really like how you explain the ending it very interesting. I think I also like to read this book.
Its good that you are taking time for doing this activity.
Keep up the great work
Sincerely
Saruja
Hi Saruja
Thank you for the positive feedback you are giving me.
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