The magic box poem

In the picture above is my poem I wrote about what I would put in my magic box.  First LS2 read the original poem of the magic box, then we took a template of that poem and filled out what I would put in. I first chose three things and then made those into sentences to see what I would put. I was learning how to write a descriptive poem. To help me out on this poem I also used my 5 senses. My favorite line from this was " the stars in the sky re imagined as marshmallows and edible diamonds ".