In the picture above is my poem I wrote about what I would put in my magic box. First LS2 read the original poem of the magic box, then we took a template of that poem and filled out what I would put in. I first chose three things and then made those into sentences to see what I would put. I was learning how to write a descriptive poem. To help me out on this poem I also used my 5 senses. My favorite line from this was " the stars in the sky re imagined as marshmallows and edible diamonds ".
I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Ms Kirkpatrick.
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Thursday, 25 August 2016
Wednesday, 27 July 2016
Advertising
This is a DLO showing what advertisement means in exact 25 words. I worked collaboratively with Tiare, Cyrus, and John. I learnt that Advertising is when the person selling the product they are targeting a certain group of people. I really enjoyed learning about this.
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Wednesday, 5 August 2015
Simple Sentences
This is a Google drawing I created with my partner based on simple sentences. One thing I learnt was that a independent clause is a sentence without capital letters or full stops and a simple sentence has both of those stuff.
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