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Saturday, 5 March 2016

Draft Writing

L1: To write a stretched sentence.


Who: Grace.
What: She danced (Grace)
When:,As the sun stroke behind Grace’s curtain, she danced.
Where:, As the sun stroke behind Grace’s curtain, she danced alone in her room.
Why:As the sun stroke behind Grace’s curtain, she danced alone in her room to prepare for her ballet lesson.


L1: To write a stretched sentence.
Who: Grace
What: Grace was dancing
When: When the sun rose,grace was dancing.
Where: When the sun rose, grace was dancing all alone in her room.
Why: When the sun rose, grace was dancing all alone in her room to prepare for her ballet lesson.

This is my sentence. I used the 5w's to stretch my sentence to make it more interesting. I sentence started off with Grace and ended with As the sun stroke behinds grace curtains, she danced alone in her room to prepare for her ballet lesson.

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