BAMM! The front door slammed like an earthquake started to begin in our house. Thomp! Thomp! It was starting to get very annoying when you could always hear my sister thumping her way down the stairs. Ever Since I got in my room I never wanted to leave it. Eventually I had to go out of my room, because I was so wanting to have a look around the other rooms.
This is one of my paragraphs I did in my writing. I was learning to use better similes in my writing so they can sound better when you read it. I have improved so much in my writing because, I added lots of interesting things that I have learnt.
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